A few typos I have noticed

  1. I don’t have a picture of this one but the grammar in Elijah’s message about garlic on the bulletin board in Highstep is a little wonky. I don’t know if it’s a direct quote and you want to keep it that way but I wanted to let you know.

  2. There is a typo in this quest description:

There should be a space between his title and name.

  1. Lastly, there is this. Slightly less black and white, you may have intended for it to be written like this but I do think that it is worded awkwardly even if it is intended:

I assume you wanted it to say “The jail had been overcrowded since before he arrived.”, or something similar to that. That would be a a more grammatically correct sentence, overcrowded doesn’t really work well as a verb like this.

I don’t know, someone will probably come along and tell me that I’m missing something obvious and am completely wrong but I still wanted to put it out there in case the devs want to know about this stuff.

And now that I look at it again, a sentence right below that, “But hard work was better than rotting away in the dark.”, is a sentence fragment. You can fix it just by removing the period that is separating it from the previous sentence and changing the “was” into an “is”.

I don’t know if this is something you’re really worried about, grammar isn’t really black and white on how to fix it, and whether you want it that way or not but I still wanted to mention these just in case.

Fingers crossed that I didn’t screw up my own grammar while I was editing this.

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thanks for the catches on the typo, ill be doing a big pass over the questing text and the journal pages in the next few days, so let me know if you see any more.

Noah’s Ark quest for Wilds reads:

“…you list…”

should read

“…your list…”

~Thanks

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got it thanks.///////

Sorry that I can’t remember the exact wording, but I know there were some typos in dialog with Markos when you turn in the stuff to unlock runesight potions.

Yep, I can recall a few more typos in the journal not mentioned here.

Plus some of the lore doesn’t make sense.

In the journal, there’s a page that has “properties” misspelled. Can’t remember what page, sorry!

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